Think of a Pencil
by Susan Bernfield, New York, NY
 1999 SF FRINGE FESTIVAL AUDIENCE REVIEWS
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1play = Think of a Pencil
2name = Constantine Costes
3email = ccostes@hotmail.com
4rating = 3 Stars
5review = Confessional monologue on behalf of a woman raised by a 70's feminist who rebels, accompanied by a slideshow that occasionally pops up a provocative question. It's okay, but I can't say I found it particularly surprising or interesting -- the best line is the explanation of the title of piece. This sounds to me like the eager revelation of someone who is very self-conscious, enjoys complaining, and thinks that their story is more special than it really is (I must say I was disappointed, as I was really captivated by the description of this piece). The actress has good energy (and a decent range of facial expressions) and takes pains to vary the pacing and move around enough to keep things going, but it is an uphill battle with this script.

1play = Think Of A Pencil
2name = Jeff Thompson
3email =
4rating = 3 Stars
5review = Engaging performer with interesting premise but pretty dull story. Dig deeper take a few more chances. Let us know these characters rather than observe them from a distance.

1play = Pencil
2name = Paul Kleyman
3email = paul@asa.asaging.org
4rating = 5 Stars
5review = A gem. One of the first and best pieces reflecting on the X generation's response to parenting ala Booomer. As a boomer parent, I want my daughter to see this, even as I hold both excitement about and trepidation regarding her responses. The writing has the fresh-wood smell of a just sharpened No. 2 pencil Susan Bernfield offers a highly effective and deceptively subtle performance of multiple characters, including herself at several ages. her strong dramatic promise often peeks through her comedic skills. I hope this performance makes it into the Best of the Fringe.

1play = Think of a Pencil
2name = Andrea Kuchlewski
3email = andrea@innedge.com
4rating = 3 Stars
5review = Susan Bernfield connected with the audience and gave a lot in her performance. What was missing for me was a strong narrative, with specific obstacles. I got a sense of the general conflict in the author's piece, but I felt that it was told to me rather than shown to me--so it didn't resonate deeply. Bernfield's performance and presence kept me engaged the whole time, though.

1play = Think of a Pencil
2name = Susan N.
3email = Kaziel@aol.com
4rating = 4 Stars
5review = Mostly fun and funny, this reminiscence hit home for me. I recognized myself as her mother, and had a great time being engaged in that relationship. However, while the show works in many ways (mostly as standup comedy), it falls short as theater. It has no plot, little conflict, and sometimes fell flat.

1play = Think of a Pencil
2name = Jill Royce Loomis
3email = jrloomis@gte.net
4rating = 1 Star
5review = My least favorite so far. Maybe too mundane
when I expected something original, risky.

1play = Think of a Pencil
2name = Billy
3email =
4rating = None
5review = Watch out! With reviews like Antonio's there's no telling what's going on...
Antonio is a performer in another Fringe Show isn't he? Humm... but his review here is pure dribble. Are they friends? Are they patting each other on the back?? Or is he giving out glowing reviews to everyone?
No this show isn't what he says, it's a mundane monologue, you've seen it all before folks... sorry, Bernfield doesn't connect with the audience, there was a titter of laughter from this person, then a few minutes later from someone else, never the audience as a whole, nor does she explore anything new or reveling. It's forced..not flowing. Sure the set is sparce, so what! It's just another "now I'm Mommy talking to daughter... oh and now I'm daughter talking to mommy..." It could be good, but it isn't.

1play = "Think of a pencil"
2name = Antonio Sacre
3email = tonysacre@aol.com
4rating =
5review = The 1999 San Francisco Fringe Theatre Festival presets "Think of a Pencil" written and performed by Susan Bernfield, directed by Tessa Leigh Derfner, at Shelton Theater, 533 Sutter Street, San Francisco, through Saturday, Sept. 18. Tickets/info: (415) 673-3847, www.sffringe.org
reviewed by Antonio Sacre, staff reviewer for Theatre Reviews Limited, on the web at Theatrereviews.com
"I want world peace . . . I want those shoes!" With this contradiction, Susan Bernfield opens her wonderful solo show, "Think of a Pencil" at the San Francisco Fringe Theatre Festival.
"Think of a Pencil" is Bernfield's autobiographical exploration of her relationship with her mother, a 1950's woman who wants liberation, independence, and a autonomy for her daughter. But when Bernfield looked at her mother, "I was just embarrassed . . . I wanted to be a typical teenager, part of the herd. I want those shoes!"
Bits of text projected as slides serve as a backdrop for Bernfield, who often speaks toward them. A step ladder, a stool, and a wooden box serve as the only set, and the direction is skillful, allowing the story to shine through. This is a simple, elegant show.
Bernfield quickly smites the audience with her charm, carries them with her crystal clear writing, and deposits them with humor, intelligence, and love, at a place that we all want to be, a place of understanding of where we came from, where we are going, and why we do what we do.

1play = Think of a Pencil
2name = MG
3email =
4rating = 2 Stars
5review = Yet another monologue that used the phrase "I'm becoming my Mother!".... sigh.... there's no inspiration here, the monologue is dull and basic, covering all the same places everyone else does without anything either funny or enlightening. The best I can tell you is that is is NOT painful to watch, more like passing an hour waiting for a bus than meaningful theater...

play = Think of a Pencil
name = Nancy D. Neilson
rating = 5 Stars
review = If you think this is like seeing someone's slides from their vacation, you're 1/2 right. But it's glorious. You'll enjoy Susan's adventures of growing up a free thinking child - whether she liked it or not! : )

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